Joseph Garvin said...

source for your new song is the first page, i'm gathering - it is sweet. in the second one love the mention of laser pointers, also lots of your other great autobiographical spasms (duster). bottom page is strongly too - that "yo" all the while throwing me off so much haha! you meant it to prob.

chelsea said...

first page is my favorite here. especially the end..
ooo girl.

second one i love the last stanza.
boy you are arrows of geese-whittled gods!
yeah, love that. not delightful, hahahaha