source for your new song is the first page, i'm gathering - it is sweet. in the second one love the mention of laser pointers, also lots of your other great autobiographical spasms (duster). bottom page is strongly too - that "yo" all the while throwing me off so much haha! you meant it to prob.
first page is my favorite here. especially the end..ooo girl.second one i love the last stanza. boy you are arrows of geese-whittled gods!yeah, love that. not delightful, hahahaha
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