oh yes carl, yes yes, and these got very ugly. It's curious to see you so disjointed with these poems... Maybe I'm way off, but the pacing and word placement made me reread some of the lines....
Usually, it seems, I guess, or perhaps, your 'usual' writing seems more sticky, cohesive, and tighter. However, these poems kind of drifted away and flowed together again, quickly. Do you know what I mean? These ones were super challenging brodog.
yeah I was kind of being sarcastic, or something, I'm not very good at it. But, I was also being a little serious. Since when have I ever left a comment like that? Never.
yes! i like taking medicines on trains, too much, and floating. i like tornados, usta drawem on my notebooks always in school, which is a great place to get high if you have to be there & you're young. good times.
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p.85, the tornado poem, kills it
oh yes carl,
yes yes, and these got very ugly. It's curious to see you so disjointed with these poems... Maybe I'm way off, but the pacing and word placement made me reread some of the lines....
Usually, it seems, I guess, or perhaps, your 'usual' writing seems more sticky, cohesive, and tighter. However, these poems kind of drifted away and flowed together again, quickly. Do you know what I mean? These ones were super challenging brodog.
yeah I was kind of being sarcastic, or something, I'm not very good at it. But, I was also being a little serious. Since when have I ever left a comment like that? Never.
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yes!
i like taking medicines on trains, too much, and floating. i like tornados, usta drawem on my notebooks always in school, which is a great place to get high if you have to be there & you're young. good times.
TREYHORA!
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